Monday, April 4, 2016

Comments for Tiger Woods presentation: Lucas and Matt

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11 comments:

  1. The best part of the presentation was the overall thing. There really wasn't a part that I felt was bad, so criticism doesn't even really concern me here. It was pretty good.

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  2. Something I found well done was the statistics. I found them extremely intriguing because I had no idea he was that good that early.

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  3. Two of the topics you mentioned that stood out to me would be the fact that Tiger was ranked #1 for 281 weeks! The other is The Tiger Woods Learning Center and the impact he has made on three-million plus children/people so far! It goes to show that even though he had made some major mistakes, he still cared deep down about helping others. He could have easily done nothing or something much smaller without a major impact for society.

    I did a report on Tiger Woods back when I was in sixth grade (1998-99) and that I wish you guys discussed a bit about his youth and how his parents got him started with golf from an extremely young age.

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  4. an area in the presontation you did very well on was the handout and the diverse facts and how you described it. my biggest issue is at times it seemed like eye contact was a struggle as it seemed like you were looking at someone infront of the powerpoint

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  5. Well done. You guys backed up your thesis really well with your research. I didn't notice any big problems.

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  6. Well done. You guys backed up your thesis really well with your research. I didn't notice any big problems.

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  7. Very interesting statistics, I liked how you guys talked about the learning center cause I had no idea it was that big. He obviously has issues staying faithful but a lot of people do and his just gets publicity since he is famous. but 120 is way to many. it wasn't very long I think you could of went more in depth about him getting into golf. but all together very good.

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  8. My constructive criticism would be to not be so fidgety or nervous. It can really show during the presentation.

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  9. It was really such a learning experience for me because I didn't know who Tiger Woods was until the media broke out talking about his adultery to his wife and since then I still haven't heard of him. I thought this was going to be a negative presentation but it totally wasn't! Although he does have a problem. I think his learning center is incredible! Thank you both for teaching me something! Constructive criticism wise, I would say that you could've included more about his race and golf and how not many black people golf. And you rushed a little bit but overall it was great!

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  10. You guys did a great job, im a really big fan of tiger woods and you guys made me learn more about him

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  11. Your thesis statement supported your presentation very well, I never knew that he was the number one player for 5 years and about his learning center too. Your coordination and pace was perfect as you went through the presentation. Handout was perfect too with enough information and pictures.
    However, you have totally forgot about the powerpoint slides which didn't move throughout the presentation. Also, you forgot to create a contrast subject in your analysis ,you could have done with another golf player.

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