Monday, April 4, 2016

Comments for Kanye West: Chase and Josh

For your comments on Presentations:

First, write about something well done.  What did you learn from this group?  What part of the Presentation seemed the best?  Be specific.

Second, offer constructive criticism that would help this group. What might have been more clear?  What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished?  Be specific.

Post all comments for this group below this post, please, as we all need feedback, and it's valuable.

9 comments:

  1. The presentation was alright, but I feel as if the majority of the presentation consisted of showing videos with Kanye being a jerk to people. Though the rest of the presentation was spot-on, that's my only concern. No big deal, though.

    ReplyDelete
  2. You both covered a broad amount of information, even though it was primarily the negatives. It did slightly change my personal opinion on him. I usually just brush off his harsh antics, even though I disagree with him interrupting Taylor Swift as well as his outburst during the hurricane Katrina catastrophe. They were both unnecessary at the time. As far as the paparazzi, I'd be annoyed and aggravated too.


    As far as constructive criticism, I wish you would have touched on some of his more positive lyrics. "The College Dropout" (2004) was released when I was 17, and at the time, it was the best of both worlds with Kanye. He did discuss the positives and the negatives. His song "Jesus Walks" was unexpected since he was telling his religious aspects in a positive manner.

    Another album "Graduation" was a more positive tone overall and more "friendly". His tone gradually became darker as time went on.

    I'm definitely a big fan just due to his creativity, even though most people can't stand him. The other interesting thing about his latest album THE LIFE OF PABLO on Tidal, is that he has recently updated it with a few minor changes to certain songs.

    ReplyDelete
  3. did a very good job supporting their thesis that he is a negative influence. I learned how cocky and rude he is to people. I believe the examples were the best part because it really shows his poor influence on kids. The part that seemed the least polished was the conclusion. Some constructive criticism was that at times the speaking was very quick and it was hard to take notes on it.

    ReplyDelete
  4. All around I believe it was a good presentation I really liked the pamphlet, it looked professional. You said "ummm" a lot but I bet I did also you never notice it when its yourself. I also wished you guys would of commented on the good he has done also. But all together it was good.

    ReplyDelete
  5. I like how you guys liked the topic you did. It made the pretention go by very smooth. You added your own views in. I didn't know that Kanye bashed Bush about not liking black people. I like your handout it was very different. It was easy to look at and I think the unique part. I think the only think you need to work on is your compare and contrast. The fact you guys were first you didn't have someone at the computer. So walking back and forth made it hard to focus.

    ReplyDelete
  6. you had information and it is easy to follow your point from start to finish. biggest issue you ran into it felt as if you read most inormation rather then explain confidently

    ReplyDelete
  7. Your handout was bomb but it was also a tab bit inappropriate. Although it is hard to have an appropriate presentation when you're talking about Kanye West. I think you both spoke well aside from the "Umms." I liked your video clips although they could have been shorter. You both made your point and I thought it was well put together.

    ReplyDelete
  8. you guys did a great job I really enjoyed the pamphlet and the youtube videos you guys showed us

    ReplyDelete
  9. You guys did a great job, learned a lot about Kanye West. However, you didn't show us any powerpoint slides and you were mostly focused on Kanye's negative influence rather than saying something positive about him, the handout could have been more decent.

    ReplyDelete

Note: Only a member of this blog may post a comment.