tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2927575513017457094.post7777359002752324123..comments2023-04-28T08:46:42.154-07:00Comments on 1:30 Blogging to Learn and Share: snapshot 6 by lali lakatosMike Lohrehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05832313501793243606noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2927575513017457094.post-59093206211176261582016-04-11T11:59:45.898-07:002016-04-11T11:59:45.898-07:00I never knew this, how would you manage buying clo...I never knew this, how would you manage buying clothes when you go out for shopping, One question for you- What is the color of carrots? "Smiling Face". Great writing , I loved it a lot, You included a scene , reported dialogues but metaphors are missing. As far as criticism come I would say that you could have taken an extra time to write it with more précised details. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08493918951904764901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2927575513017457094.post-65912506762537906932016-04-11T11:46:40.601-07:002016-04-11T11:46:40.601-07:00Wow. Just wow. I never would've guessed. I rea...Wow. Just wow. I never would've guessed. I really felt the passion in your writing. I really like where you were talking about how you couldn't find the green marker but it was right infront of you. That has to be kind of hard but way to use that as inspiration! What colors can you not see? I think you should write more about what you like to draw and also how hard its been for you to be colorblind, like add in your other struggles. Caitlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17321693420532769834noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2927575513017457094.post-33342230174937873072016-04-11T11:42:43.704-07:002016-04-11T11:42:43.704-07:00(this is the additional part to our in class assig...(this is the additional part to our in class assignment)<br /><br />As I stated, I felt your strongest point is how your art reflects the current moment in your life. I believe you could have made your statement stronger by using more descriptions of your work when you are in a great mood versus a darker time and what those pieces of art were visually showing! I guess the easiest way to put this comparison of your work would be a sunny day versus a storm.Andyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17752454729141982103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2927575513017457094.post-7700046242021383912016-04-11T11:42:26.874-07:002016-04-11T11:42:26.874-07:00"if I ever lost my right hand I would learn t..."if I ever lost my right hand I would learn to draw with my left." is by far one of the best mind sets i have ever seen because that just shows me the determination you posess. my only criticysm is that it is great but a example would have just made something great amazing<br />Gabehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12280229197621963875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2927575513017457094.post-19017910981470175602016-04-11T11:41:52.327-07:002016-04-11T11:41:52.327-07:00I never knew you were colorblind, and I think it&#...I never knew you were colorblind, and I think it's pretty cool the way you created the artwork and such.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2927575513017457094.post-2396826887185193532016-04-11T11:40:54.922-07:002016-04-11T11:40:54.922-07:00I read that in your voice.I read that in your voice.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2927575513017457094.post-25518963581839021842016-04-11T09:30:56.338-07:002016-04-11T09:30:56.338-07:00That's wild! Are you completely colorblind? Or...That's wild! Are you completely colorblind? Or is it just certain colors that appear different to you? It is also interesting how your art reflects your current "struggles" in life with different color variations and how they seem to stay on a darker spectrum with greater stress!Andyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17752454729141982103noreply@blogger.com