Monday, April 4, 2016

Comments for Ellen: Addison and Andy

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First, write about something well done.  What did you learn from this group?  What part of the Presentation seemed the best?  Be specific.

Second, offer constructive criticism that would help this group. What might have been more clear?  What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished?  Be specific.

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10 comments:

  1. Very good. I agree that Ellen is definitely a positive influence, and I believe that this presentation shows that in a very well-done manner.

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  2. The amount of hard facts I heard Andy spew out was incredible. Every little detail was memorized. I felt the presentation was done pretty darn well. Good research, good powerpoint. All around good job both of you.

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  3. One thing that was very good was sticking with the thesis and using good support for the thesis statement. Everything this group said was something new to me because I didn't know anything about her. I think the part about going to Johnny Carson was the best part. Some constructive criticism is that there could've been a few more examples of how she influences children. The least polished part seemed to be the comparison to another pop culture influence.

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  4. The detail was great and at times may have been a bit much at the start but it got much better as it went on. While you were loud and informational you struggled to really focus on the people whom were listening causing a lack of eye contact

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  5. I think that the one thing that could have been improved would be the amount of information done of him and his childhood maybe.

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  6. Good job overall. You guys got me really interested in Ellen. 1 or 2 times you guys had to think off the top of your head but no big problems.

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  7. I think that the one thing that could have been improved would be the amount of information done of him and his childhood maybe.

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  8. I liked your slide show. You could tell that you put time into it. The pictures that you dug and found were great. I learned that Ellen is a very positive person in society I didn't know that she does so much for people. I also didn't know that she failed at first when she first began as a talk show host. I loved how Andy knew a lot about the topic good job. Even though it was your fourth pick you still were very educated on your topic. I feel like you guys could have worked together more on your talking parts. You talked over each other and I didn't know whos part it was. I feel like the hand out would have been better with a few pictures but I liked the outline on it.

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  9. You guys did a awesome job, what I like the most is how you guys communicated with us you had very good eye contact, one thing that could have been improved is you guys lost track a little bit

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  10. Indeed ellen is a positive influence on the society. The thesis statement was good and your powerpoint slides was great, The pace and coordination between you guys was nice too that showed that you did researched a lot for the presentation.
    However, sometimes the coordination was lacking, also you forgot to create a contrast subject in your analysis. But overall it was a great presentation.

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